I do wonder
is it worthwhile
for you
to belong
and persist
in my dreams.......
Who knows
sometimes my smiles.......
The look in my eyes
brimming with love......
Will make
your heaven fall apart....
Turn dark
like mine.
is it worthwhile
for you
to belong
and persist
in my dreams.......
Who knows
sometimes my smiles.......
The look in my eyes
brimming with love......
Will make
your heaven fall apart....
Turn dark
like mine.
2 comments:
would like to add a twist to this....especially in the last few lines...with your permission :
The look in my eyes
brimming with love....
will make
somebody else'
heaven fall apart.....
making
her
heart
turn dark
like mine !!
(her can always be replaced by him....your comments)
I wonder too isn't it worthwhile for me to have you belong and persist in my dreams...
And show you your face, your life, through my eyes...
Smiling, wondering, longing for love, freedom and peace...
May I make your world fall apart, and make you fall in love, all over again, with something called LIFE!!!
Life is as beautiful as you and your poem, Mona...
:)
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